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醫(yī)學醫(yī)藥論文英文摘要中的常見錯例分析
１、醫(yī)藥科技工作者撰寫醫(yī)藥論文時一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要寫得準確與否，很大程度上體現(xiàn)了作者的學術水平，也與論文的影響力有很大關系。我們有幸從《醫(yī)藥導報》雜志社獲取了相當數(shù)量論文的英文摘要原稿。該刊特邀英文校譯——同華中科技大學同濟醫(yī)學院馮新為教授，年逾九旬仍伏案筆耕，為這些稿件做了大量細致深入的校譯工作，可謂句句汗水字字珠璣。給醫(yī)藥科技論文英文摘要的寫作提供了一個范本，對廣大醫(yī)藥科技工作者來說也是一次極其珍貴的學習機會。本刊特輯錄刊載其原文及馮教授所作修正、點評，以饗讀者。
2、編制體例：本文按照原文、修正、點評次序編寫；修改、插入處以黑體斜體，刪節(jié)處附括號說明，如有點評附上標數(shù)字注明。
1、 原文：
Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1' XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology' Tongji Medical College' Huazhong University of Science and Technology' Wuhan 430030' China; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine' Wuhan 430061'China)ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueting liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled water' and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples were determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm'λR=350nm). Result: The average recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38'0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion: The method is simple' convenient and available.KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid修正：Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1' XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2' Tongji Medical College' Huazhong University of Science and Technology' Wuhan 430030' China;
2.The Faculty of Pharmacy' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine' Wuhan 30061'China)Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueting oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in distilled water' and then xtracted （into the sample刪去) with water-saturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples were subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning λS=280nm'λR=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%'（and刪去)RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five刪去) batches of samples were 0.38'0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method is simple' convenient and feasible.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic acid
